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This basically sums up the times. I loved it. Had pieces in it that remind me of my own strange diatribes. Classic. Light as a feather heavy as lead... Much love!!

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Well then I am definitely interested in what words you have to utter! Haha.

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I am another you! lol. I am definitely interested in yours as well!! Makes life beautiful and fun!!

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No, YOU are beautiful and fun! That's what we do in my house sometimes. My son and I say "no, you." We have chilled on it a little bit. Also it was "your face". I would say "oh that sky is sooo beautiful" and he would say "no YOUR FACE is so beautiful". On the other hand, I might say, "Man, I need to clean this up, it's disgusting." And he would say "no, your FACE is disgusting." HAHAhha So, sometimes good and sometimes bad, but always hilarious. So there ya go. He has chilled on the your face thing, but it had a great run...at my face. Hence, NO, YOU!

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haha. i've done that! kind of an era in the home! Keeps it lively and aware! And fun!!! And ya, I am beautiful and fun. Thank you!!! lol.

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Why yes it isn’t a little strange was it?

Quick

We must hurry

Before the Bafflehills invert our enclosure

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It IS perplexing :)Your response confused me and then I had a giggle, realizing that was the POINT. Haha. "Why yes, it isn't a little strange, was it? " Haha.

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This is really cool and mad impressive

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Holy shit you incorporated all of them!

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Oh, no , not even close :)

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aw crikey, I accidentally deleted the wrong comment. Anyway. Someone else used them all, I believe. I have a feeling we are in for some really weird and interesting stuff. It was fun.

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Wow, this is fabulous!

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Why, thanks:) Haha. It was a weird one, for sure.

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BRAVO!!!! I'm so impressed. Seriously. Vexed!! Bafflehills. YES.

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I need to figure out how to format poetry on here. I couldn't get it to hold the spaces between stanzas. I will figure that out later and edit it, perhaps, with spaces.

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ok, I figured it out - duh :)

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That was a fiasco :) Hahhaa. Tough one. Not being able to break apart the sentences. I wasn't sure if she meant we couldn't break up a phrase at ALL or if we just couldn't edit them. KNow what I mean? I mean, technically, breaking up the phrase IS editing. So, there you go. Whew. My mind s a muddle. Holy Bafflehills.

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I think it’s very creative. And compelling enough to keep me reading all the way to the end!

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That's saying something! Hahaha. I'll take it

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"I wish I had a Big Wheels

Made with me in mind,

So I could pedal around the hood,

Until I wrecked it.

It’s unexpected."

I f'king love the last rhyme. BRILLLiant!

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That is something I truly DO want. :) It must have come through. Thanks. I miss my BIG WHEELS

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